Nobody came and went


Heat bleats longer light

cracks under foot crowd around —

I merge, nobody.

#haikuchallenge nobody

This is what I ended up with to describe walking around in downtown, feeling discombobulated in a crowd, as the days stay longer later, and  passing on sidewalks is a tussle of anonymity, then shout outs to dread, the push-pull is the formula that never seems to change.

The writing was more of a struggle than I thought it would be– lost in translation, perhaps?

The reversal or 2 thoughts opposed, right next to each other,  I think I comprehend that theory, when I read it.

Have I managed to create it? Well, that is a different matter altogether.

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